You did everything I asked of you and more
I don't know how things changed so soon
Everyday I thanked God for my blissful boon
And for the snug, safe feeling in my core
Now I regret treating you so poor
My wish that I was wiser extends to the moon
You did everything I asked of you and more
I don't know how things changed so soon
You think the solution is to even out the score
But to you my heart is forever attune
And your actions now leave my heart strewn
The question lies whether to inquire or ignore
You did everything I asked of you and more
1 comment:
Nice job - remember the power of concrete nouns. I like the mood of the poem. Couch that mood in concrete details to make the message resonate. - elmeer
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